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just another day




Another day of pain and outcries,




of broken promises and lies,







Another day of yelling and screaming







Another day of cringing and fearing,






Just another day of my eyes tearing.

                                         




some call this LIFE i call it HELL

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idk ..... ummmmm   .....  is it good or bad ?
Written February 28th, 2006

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  • June 20, 2006
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    babe i love you but i think kelsey has
    this same poem??
    love ya lots
    amber


  • CantHandle ThisPain
    February 28, 2006
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    thanx i really appriciate it

    ♥ paige


  • XxPlaStiCxHeaRtxX
    February 28, 2006
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    i think its good. short, simple, to the point. The short phrases have a greater impact on the reader.