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Begging for Me

You know you want me
   on you.
 You crave to taste
     these lips.
 The need to feel controlled,
your body on my body.
         Testosterone through your veins,
     your fingers through
          my hair.
  And I love those eyes,
          when their looking
            into mine,
          begging me
              for me.

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Written February 28th, 2006

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  • LemonDropAngel
    March 1, 2006
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    great job i love it as usual, its hot


  • Painted Warrior
    March 1, 2006
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    This is hot!!! I love it, it's sensual and powerful. Great job.


  • bluidbabiegirl
    March 1, 2006
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    ha! I most def. think I creamed myself everywhere... That was a turn on from hell... Oh the devil is a liar... ha! i loved it. nice.

  • sweetheart4rain
    March 1, 2006
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    way hot..lol...i think this poem is gonna turn many people on as they read it
    great write..luv ya lots
    -Britt


  • Question
    February 28, 2006
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    hm. interesting. great job, we havent talked in a while...


  • mysticlabyrinth
    February 28, 2006
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    that's hot. great write, as always.

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