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Mujer Sufrida

Hay amor en la costumbre, en el mirar de unos ojos
  que te siguen día a día aunque solo te brinden enojos.

  En los labios que tú deseas aunque han besado miles bocas.
 
  En unas manos que no te tocan aunque de frente estalles
   en deseos sola.
 
  En el puño que te incita a quedarte, atrapada y loca en casa
  , mirando tu simple reflejo de una mujer marchitada.

  En el regalo de aniversario que llegó, siempre un año más
  tarde.
 
  En la perdida de tus hijos porqué a él lo amabas a pesar
  de la vida y sus consejos.

  Hay amor en la costumbre, hay costumbre en el amor, ciego,
  tacaño, avaro, maldito, mentiroso, abusivo, vacio, infiel,
  lleno de maldición.
 
  Perdistes todo por nada, por seguir un sueño sin respeto,
  por perderte triste sin avaloro tras una vacia ilusión.

Author notes

Dedicated to my mother a woman that has been mistreated by life and a man, not proud to call my father.
Written November 1st, 2005

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  • AngelDeAmor
    March 5, 2006
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    Blind, a penny pincher, evil, a lier, abusive, empty, unfaithful, full of bad intentions... Not much of a man angel. I missed you and glad to see you again amor. Until next we speak.

    ~Pedro~


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 28, 2006
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    Think a translation into English would help in the Author comments - would love to be able to read this and learn more about your mother. Sounds like quite a story here.

  • grannyeri gold member
    February 28, 2006
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    Think a translation into Englush would help in the Author comments - would love to be able to read this and learn more about your mother. Sounds like quite a story here.