There are no words to express how I feel
There are no feelings to make my heart heal
Was my life suposed to be this way
To make me feel like crap everyday
When I think about the past
Seems things was hitting me too fast
Everything I took from you
Everything I stood around to do
Stealing wasnt the way
I didnt think about that back in the day
I was a little to young then
To see the pain you went through, way back when
I didnt even see the heartache you went through
I wish I would have knew
I wish there was somthing I could do
I wish I could go back and tell you, "Thank you"
Sorry I never told you, all I wanted to say
Was that I love you, now your too far away
All I was, was trouble
With three kids,that's daily double
I remeber when Jeff was there
I thought he truly cared
But waking up to hear you crying
To walk in and see you lying
But all I could to was sigh
Never told you my heart, felt like it could die
Thanks for everything you did for me
Now that Im older I and I opened my eyes, I see
That all you wanted, was for us to have a good life
To raise three kids it usley takes and man and wife
But you seem to have done better by yourslef
I love you, and Thank you for everything
Love,
Your Daughter
Author notes
This is a poem for my mom.
Thanks for everything,
I love you
Written February 28th, 2006
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This is so sad.and to know its true. you and your mom have a great reationship. and i know that she liked this poem cause you've told me like 1 milliion tims. good job. keep it up.
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awesome! it was beautifully written adn I was very very impressed, nice write and good luck
~Brooke -
Wonderful. This is about your mom? Wow. Brittney this is great. Great job on this. I can see that when you put your mind to it then you can do it. You can make or creat anything. Just listen to what your heart is saying and then you will see what love and trust is all about. You will also see the real you and you are very good at poetry. Keep up the good work honey. You are doing a very good job. Very good.
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This is very good. This is very impressive. Great job sis. I know you miss your mom. But trust me she loves you. ALWAYS.
-Tj -
The love for your mom is so wonderful. This is great work. This makes me think. I wanna pacth things up with my mom. Well anyways great write. Tell your mom I said Hi.
XO
-Stacy -
GOOD WORK
VERY GOOD ,IT WAS WORTH WAITING FOR.NICE PIECE OF WRITING HERE,I AM SURE THAT YOUR MOM ALWAYS KNEW THAT YOU WERE SORRY,WE MOMS DO UNDERSTAND WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE CHILD YOU KNOW ,WE WERE KIDS ONCE YOU KNOW, -
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love this writer....for sure...
Wow!! makes me search. remember the struggles with my own family. so sweet. sweetness seems to flow out of you...and love....like a river. keep writing! Love this piece!! atb. -encore- -
ok !
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