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Chocolate (erotica)

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I decide to make
one of your favorite treats.
Chocolate covered strawberries.

I melt the chocolate
and draw the strawberries
through the dark liquid
drenching them.

I set them aside
to harden
lost in thought
and the rich aroma
of the decadent treats.

I think about art
brushes
warm luscious chocolate
and you.

I decide to paint you
in creamy candy colors.
I grab my basting brush
and the remaining cocoa confection
as I contemplate
form and figures.

I thrust my bristles
in the molten heat
as I persuade you to comply.

You’re reclining on the sofa
gloriously exposed
as I touch the tip
of my brush to your skin.

I swirl strokes of chocolate
in sinuous designs
along your eager shaft.

I watch
enthralled
as you swell and expand
in an urgent surge
of desire.

I am compelled
to taste my creation.

I kneel before you
and lick my tongue
around
your chocolate
covered shaft.

Eagerly
I devour the sweetness
as I lap along your rigid length
and suckle
the sticky substance
from your sensuous scepter.

I am aroused
as you moan
and press yourself
tightly against my lips.

You lift your lustful hips
straining
as you invade my mouth.

I wrap myself
around my scrumptious treat
and feast
on your engorged phallus.

You go wild
forcefully driving
your need
deep into my hungry throat.

I flick my tongue
speaking to you
in a familiar language
as you rise and writhe
seeking release.

I growl
as you plunge
vigorously upward.

I feel you quiver and throb
as you release your essence
and I swallow
the last bit of chocolate
…and you.



Patricia Gibson-Williams
February 28, 2006

Author notes

It was good for me... Was it good for you?  Oh and the strawberries were great too, once we finally got around to eating them.  P.
Written February 28th, 2006

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  • luckynsincere
    March 5, 2006
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    Yummy! LOL! Now i want some darn chocolate!! This was wonderfully penned! I enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing this for the contest!!
    Best of luck!
    Melanie


  • tomisb
    March 4, 2006
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    Wonderful, wonderful,wonderful. I really will never be able to look a chocolate cherries the same again. Did he kiss you when you were done to see if there was chocolate left upon your lips, two chocolate covered lips from which he could sip your love. Delightful candy covered joy of a poem. Love, Tom B.


  • cosmicrose
    February 28, 2006
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    So there has to be subliminal messages in this thing somewhere cause I have had this insatiable appetite for chocolate the past couple days. So much so that I am sitting here eating this luscious chocolate cake and I'm on a diet. This contest is going to make me fat I can see it now.

  • Silent Drifter
    February 28, 2006
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    oh the sexiness

    wow...thats all i can say...turned me on!


  • meic
    February 28, 2006
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    .... just returned from my cold shower ... yes, it was good - very good - for me. A wickedly naughty piece of erm ... tasteful ... erotica. [Reminds me a little of my story By the Book allpoetry.com/Story/1798558 ]

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