Sometimes I feel alive.
When I feel alive
I laugh
Sing
Cry
Feel lonely
Hurt
Alone
Despair.
Sometimes I take a little pill
my doctor gave me.
Sometimes I'm not alive.
Author notes
option 6
A contest entry
- Apathy & Empathy by ChildeOfChaos.
1200 points, ended May 16, 2007, 5 entries
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Comments
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I like this poem it's very sad and depression sometimes pills makes you feel dead I know the feeling
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This is really good. I really liked the ending. Its really sad, and depressing!!!! Great job!!! And good luck in my contest!!!
-Erin Lynn -
Good
Man kinda depressing. I like the poem though short but shows how you can get your feeling out in words without using many of them. Good job
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