I love you
[unlike any other love I have known]
I know you
[better than the ones that stare]
I accept you
[with all your faults and secrets]
I taste you
[though I haven't in some time]
I feel you
[when I am all alone,in the bed I share with him]
I need you
[more than water,you quench my thirst]
You love me
[more for who you wish I could be]
You know me
[though still blush at my bluntness]
You accept me
[for who I have grown to be]
You taste me
[within your morning coffee,bitter]
You feel me
[when you are aching for affection]
You need me
[for I hold the key to your past,present,future]
You and I are an "us" that few care to acknowledge
~A pair of matched mittens
with holes worn from wear....~
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Written February 28th, 2006
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This is a great,touching, and unique write. I really enoyed reading your poem. I find the way that you formed this to be very interesting.Thanks.~Danielle~
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This was lovely.. but I do wonder why no one cares to acknowledge this coupling? I liked your style and the way you laid this out to be almost a personal introspective point of view. Very nice. Keep writing and best wishes.
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Thoroughly Modern Milly
And you are the modern day mistress as you lie in your bed thinking of the one who stays in your head.He knows you so well but you still can annoy,a mature lady not a Barbie like toy.Loved the style and the reflections on your thoughts.Excellent piece of writing.Elizabeth. -
interesting write
it's intriguing...has me wondering what this couple's story is...why do few care to acknowledge them?
you've done well in showing how well this couple knows each other. i like the layout you've used too.
very nicely done
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Very original...i love original works. good concept and it was pretty interesting as well. thank you for sharing...Gitaryzt
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Cool
Wow such passion for mere mittens? Very cute!
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