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Creek Day

The alarm rang with an aggravating sound. All she wanted to do was stay in bed and sleep away her hurt. She slipped out of bed and walked over to the window. Cursing at the sun, she pulls back the curtain letting the sunshine brightly into the room. How dare the sun shine when she was so sad, she thought. Grumbling she walked over to her closet to pick out her clothes for work. As she did so, she heard the radio announcer say how the weather was going to be beautiful for the day. As she reached into her closet for her blue work suit, she smiles as her swim suit catches her eye. Knowing that work is not going to be in today’s plans, she grabs her beach bag, blanket and towel and heads for her car. Throwing the bag into the car, she grins,turns up her music and heads for the nearby creek. Giggling to her self, she thinks of the trouble she will be in for not going to work, but oh well a girl has to do what a girl has to do.

 

 The creek is not far but such a nice quiet place to visit. As she pulls up to the creek she throws her shoes into the car and grabs her bag. Standing in front of her car she gazes out over the creek and sighs. Not a single soul in sight as she listens to the ripple of the creek over the rocks. Slowly walking toward the creek she finds a nice sunny spot and spreads out her blanket. Slowly slipping down to the blanket she watches the water, getting lost in her thoughts as her mind travels back to when things were good. Times when there was not a constant fight between her and her man. Last night had been the final straw. There would be no more arguments, no more accusations, and no more whys. Her hand travels to her cheek to wipe the tears that are falling from her eyes. She tells herself these are the last tears and it is time to go forward. Drying her eyes on her towel she decides she wants to swim.  

 

  She stands and looking around to be sure no one else was around and watching, she slides her clothes to the ground. She reaches for her swimsuit and stops. Standing naked, a small smile spreads over her lips as she thinks to herself, what the hell, there was no one around so why not go skinny dipping. Shyly covering herself up with her hands and giggling at herself knowing that this was something she ordinarily would not do, she eases into the cold water. Letting out a scream as the cold water hits her naked body, she thinks, I must be crazy. Forcing herself into the cold water she begins to swim. Slowly at first, as she feels her body responding to the cold water. She turns over, notices her nipples are very hard and erect as she floats on her back. Automatically her hand reaches for the hard nipple. So hard and erect as she circles the nipple with her finger. Her legs slowly moving in the water as she feels the splash of cold water between her legs. Shivering as she feels a sudden desire building deep inside her, she turns over and swims back to the shore. Feeling the water pushing against her body as she swims she feels an all too familiar need. Climbing out of the water she grabs her towel and dries off, slowly glancing around to make sure she is still alone, she drops the towel and sits crossed legged on the blanket.

 

  Shaking her wet head as small water droplets drip between her breasts she watches the droplets dance across her nipples. Reaching down to the water droplets, flicking her nipples making the water droplets fall she moans. Laying back she closes her eyes and opens her legs letting the sun warm her moistness. Her hands move to her breasts and taking one in each hand, she begins to rub them. A soft gasp escapes her lips as she feels her nipples grow under her hands once again. Kneading, rubbing and tweaking her nipples she feels herself getting wetter, the urge to touch too great and as her fingers slides between her legs a slight whisper falls from her mouth. “Oh yessss,” she cries as she feels her own wetness. Making small circles with her fingers gently brushing against her hard clit, her back arches. A small shudder ripples through her body as she can’t hold, deprive herself any more, she slips 2 fingers inside herself slowly rocking her body in rhythm with her fingers.

 

  Opening her eyes she sees a man standing there before her. She opens her mouth to scream, He tells her not to stop as He stands there. She looks up at Him too scared to move and too scared not to do as told. Her fingers slip inside her once again, she feels her wetness once again, moaning she bites her lip as she feels her walls closing in on her. The release she needs so bad so very close. Closing her eyes she pushes herself to her limit. Her fingers gliding into her wetness as her back arches, she screams loudly as she feels the waves of pleasure rolling over her. Lost in her pleasure she forgets she is being watched until she feels a strange hand between her legs. Startled she opens her eyes and sees the stranger next to her. His fingers kneading her now sensitive clit as he whispers and says, “Now, let me finish what you started.”  

 

  His lips kissing her tenderly, at first and she can feel the need in his kisses as she kisses him hard. Her legs trembling as his hands cover her hot wet pussy she moans into his kiss. His body slides over hers and in one swift thrust he enters her, thrusting hard and deep as he pins her arms down. Bucking wildly under him, she welcomes his hardness deep into her throbbing pussy. Over and over he glides into her as she moans and writhes. With a sudden jerk he pulls out of her and turns her over forcing her to all fours and takes her just as quickly as before. His cock ragging hard now as He drives deeper into her she lower her face, raising her pussy to him. Gripping the blanket as her pussy is being pounded hard she feels his fingers digging into her flesh as he lets out a loud moans, she feels his cock explode inside her and as he cums he grabs her shoulders as she pushes back and cums against his now throbbing cock. His kisses covers her back as her body spasms and trembles as the wave of pleasure sweeps through her. He slowly slips out of her wetness as she moans. Her head buried in the blanket trying to catch her breath.  Lifting her head she turns to speak to him but there is no one there. She stands and looks around and whispers into the quiet air, “thanks I needed that.’

Author notes

Hello E/everyone
This is my first story so I welcome all comments. Thanks to shimmer for giving me the courage to do this.
Written February 27th, 2006

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Comments

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  • DecemberSun
    March 20, 2006
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    Great ending. It makes you wonder whether this stranger was ever really there, or a product of her imagination.
    Edited on Mar 20, 8:21 p.m. because ''.

  • kummie
    March 19, 2006
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    I am very new to this myself. This was my first story I had ever written. I was very excited to see all the wonderful comments..thanks for taking the time to read it

  • Kandied Kisses
    March 18, 2006
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    Provocative

    Great write Kummie. I'm relatively new at this myself, however find that it's a great source of expressing our inner-most desires and passion. Very provocative....xxkandixx

  • kummie
    March 4, 2006
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    Im glad you liked my story. It really helps to know others think my story was good. I feel like a kid in a candy store! thanks again for the wonderful words.

  • kummie
    March 4, 2006
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    Glad you enjoyed my story. And yes it was my first story, smiles. I'm looking forward to writng another one really soon. Thanks for the encouragement


  • q-pid
    March 3, 2006
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    Damn!!! I really enjoyed reading this. Extremely hot. And this is your first write? Wow, great job. I espeacially loved the twist that you put at the end.

    Her head buried in the blanket trying to catch her breath. Lifting her head she turns to speak to him but there is no one there. She stands and looks around and whispers into the quiet air, thanks I needed that.

    Great write!!! I loved it.

    q-pid

  • kummie
    March 2, 2006
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    Thanks so much for the word of encouragement. This was my first story and all the wonderful comments have made me want to do more. Hopefully everyone will enjoy my next story also. Congratualtions on your trophy!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    WOW! How hot this was! Wow!


  • Master Domtos rose
    March 1, 2006
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    Congratulations on the bronze trophy. This was a really good write and if, as you say, this is only your first one, keep writing along these lines and you can't go far wrong. Be well and blessed be.


  • shimmer
    March 1, 2006
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    huggss congrats on trophy sis, job well done

  • kummie
    March 1, 2006
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    I will always listen to my wise sis, if you cantell me who she is. (lol) Im just kidding. I can never thank you enough shimmer for giving me that push....huggssss

  • kummie
    March 1, 2006
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    Giggles, should i apologize for leaving you in a *state*? i am very glad my story brought a smile to your face and a warm feeling elsewhere. grins

  • kummie
    March 1, 2006
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    Smiles happily and says Thank You for taking your time to read my story. It really means alot to me that others like what i wrote.

  • kummie
    March 1, 2006
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    Thank you for the wonderful things you have said about my story. i hope to be able to do more..

  • kummie
    March 1, 2006
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    Thank you so much for the kind words. I was very nervous to submit it, but everyone is being so supportive it makes me very happy!!


  • shimmer
    March 1, 2006
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    seems your story is doing well. and you said you couldn't write. told you people would like it, always listen to your wise sis.


  • PinkKittens
    March 1, 2006
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    Steamy story that has left me steaming.

    That story is a version of a fantasy that I have had quite often: being watched while, um, pleasuring myself. I like how it was outdoors and that the 'watcher' may or may not have been imaginary. It is quite effective as erotica as it has left me in a heck of a state. Maybe it will be inspirational.


  • Poetic Sunshine gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    Hot write thanks for entering the contest.....


  • March 1, 2006
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    I agree with Ebonie kate, this was hot. It was romantic and you managed to make it sweet. I am surprised this is your first story beecause you did so well.


  • Somebody-New
    March 1, 2006
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    damn, that was hot, lol.
    usually i am not a huge fan of erotica, but that was very well written.
    it didn't drag on either, you got straight into the story and the ending was great to.
    nice job

  • kummie
    February 28, 2006
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    thanks for your comment. its good to know other enjoy my thoughts.


  • Miss Vertige
    February 28, 2006
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    Marvellous!

    Damn great! I'm reading this in college, and I'm so damn wet now. Great work!

  • kummie
    February 28, 2006
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    hugss shimmer,I can only hope to learn to be as great as you are with your words. thanks for your time and patience hugsss


  • shimmer
    February 28, 2006
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    awww huggss to you my lil kummiebear, i was so happy for you when you told me you wrote something and had to jump on right away to check it out. welcome to the site and you know i wish you all the luck here and in the contest. this is a great story sis, i knew you had it in you, and i guess from what you wrote, i mean it in more ways then one, having it in you

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