My heart skips a beat
When you kiss my lips
My heart skips a beat
When you touch my hand
When you play with my hair
When you look into my eyes
My heart skips a beat
You take my breath away
With your looks of love
You take my breath away
With a whisper in my ear
With a caress upon my face
And with a kiss upon my neck
You take my breath away
My heart skips a beat,
And you take my breath away,
With your love.
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not the way I usualy write let me know what U think thanks Nik
Written February 27th, 2006
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Thank nyou I am glad that you enjoyed it an gratefull for the insight I was meaning it to be simple i did not want to overdramatize it and make it seem fake It is in its simpleist form the most pure for theis one
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Sweet!
It has a very simple form, the words are simple, the sentences are simple.And I must say, its very effective. They convey such beautiful images, and its as if, in its simplicity, it conveys so much more depth. -
I am sorry that I have not been back to you sooner. I like reading your heart and soul in your pieces. I see on your author paged that you are published. Did you do it yourself or have apublisher pick up your writes? RC
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thank u drk I knew I could count on you for a glowing comment I surely missed them But have been really busy lately much love and respect to ya Nik
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Niki, though this isn't the style you usually write in I thought it was excellent. Your repetition in the stanzas makes it stand out more. Way to go!!
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Thank you I am glad that you like it I love when people can relate to what i writ expesialy when it is som,e thing good Nik
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emotions I am all too familiar with :] they are good feelings.
nothing like haivng someone you love so much they can literally make you feel breathless.
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In this poem you have parts that you repeat, as if to prove your point. It's a very pretty poem. Nice work, love.
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