My body is on fire
I sweat
My perspiration drips off me, soaking the bed
I quiver
Suddenly I am cold
An ice cube invades my body slowly
I shiver
My back arches automatically
The ice melts inside me
I shake
Which is better?
The passionate flame of your kisses on my lips?
Or the frozen joy of the ice in your mouth,
You chilled tongue inviting itself into my sacred areas?
Either way
I can't take it any longer
I need to feel your bulging mass inside me
I ask one thing of you
Fulfill my desires?
And you do
You thrust the large, hard flesh into my hole
I convulse
A long, throaty moan escapes these soft lips
More
Harder
Faster
Ahhhhhhhhh
I scream in a completely pleasured state
I collapse
Thank you, Master
This immense pleasure is such a marvelous reward
I am a grateful slave
Now
How may I please you?
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Written February 27th, 2006
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i like this just how it is...i dont write this kind of stuff (due to my ex still has me on his favorites...no need to read...lol) i really like this...i think its fine just how it is, in a way there is something that seems to be left out but i think it leaves myestry. **raises eyebrow** nice written
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wow... thats really really realistic! I love love love it! it just sends shivers up my spine but its just really hot. I love the descriptive lines.
my favorite has to be "The passionate flame of your kisses on my lips"
but the first moment it goes inside is deffinately the best and you captured that moment almost perfectly.
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There is something missing. Perhaps as a slave you have desensitised yourself so much that the world is monochromatic and it takes being inflames to get you to step into life.
I hope that you can hear me. I am not putting you down just relfecting on what I feel or don't feel from the poem. Love,Tom B. -
Oooh, really nice! Short and too the point, and VERY hot! I like it.
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HOT!!!
This is hot! I love the slave and master idea.
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