I did not want to let you go
Don't leave me, a desperate no!
I enjoined every day like the last
We were one in the past
My tree of eternity
The image very clear
I felt just the fear
I did not want to lose you
I knew you don't live here
All what's left is one clue
My tree of eternity
Four weeks were gone
Never regretted the time we've spend
People said good-bye
I never left you
My tree of eternity
Author notes
I don't like the last part of the poem that much.. but it took me such a long time to write that one.. ill maybe overwork sometime later..
Written February 27th, 2006
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Very Good!
I really like this poem. I like the way it flows. I think you did a really good job with it. It's different than most I read on here. I like it! Keep Writing!
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The sentiments created here are very lovely and very true to the flow of the love and flow of the heart as well..a pretty work here..keep it up my friend....
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thanks a lot!!
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very nice, i really liked it
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thanks a lot!!!! both of you!! did you recognize that english is not my mother tongue?
I mean can you read it between the lines? I really do my best!
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wow...very powerful...great job!!! Keep up the awsome work!!! Check out my stuff if you'd like. Once again great job!!
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Sploosh,
Cool pome I like it "It's Groovy" Keep up the good work, and I hope you make another like it, and have fun making the next one.
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