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Oh God

Oh God listen to us please
We are crying here need your bless
Oh God we know you are only one
Cause you have the power of ton

God when we turn into wrong
or do something that does the harm
We feel sorry and loudly cry
we want you to forgive us until we die

We keep doing things again & again
We feel thing the same again & again
God help us to follow the right track
God give us the power to not to be a scrap

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Written February 26th, 2006

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 24

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    Your genuine sincerity in this write grabs me......You mention some spiritual hangups we exhibit in our lives of repeating mistakes over and over, God's power is mighty, and we always need forgiveness....Keep sharing your heart in your writes like this...Your voice speaks...


  • Veronica-Armijo
    December 4, 2008
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    Nice

    Very thoughtful and from the heart.


  • SilverWolf
    September 11, 2008
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    OMG!!!! SPLENDID!

    that is a great cry out to god!
    great plea!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    A lovely call to God Rehan, I need him so much right now, and am praying hard to him to help me, Josie


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    wonderful poem, as nothing more than a cry out to God. this was good.

    although i must make a suggestion, in the line

    "We are crying here need your bless"

    that doesn't make sense. maybe you meant to put "blessing"


  • innocence jaded.xx
    June 24, 2008
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    This is beautiful :] I loved your use of words. Great write

  • celadia
    June 24, 2008
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    I like the plea, we all need help now and again.


  • rawr41507
    June 23, 2008
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    i like it =]


  • maralisa silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    A beautiful prayer we can do the same things over and over again without realizing only some people realize and from that we grow and when we believe we can then move forward with his grace by asking for his help in our time of need beautiful prayer
    We keep doing things again & again
    We feel thing the same again & again
    God help us to follow the right track
    God give us the power to not to be a scrap a pleasure to read some wonderful words of prayer from your heartx

  • Anyajoellienne
    June 21, 2008

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    Inspiring

    A good prayer
    understanding , leaning on him in time of need
    wanting to do better and admitting weakness
    very good


  • xXFreedom-of-LoveXx
    June 6, 2008
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    God when we turn into wrong
    or do something that does the harm
    We feel sorry and loudly cry
    we want you to forgive us until we die


    yeah this is true
    and a good penning
    wish you luck


  • Fairy Moon
    April 19, 2006
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    Well this isnt what I thought it was going to be. However good write. Glad I stopped to read it. ~Shannon~~

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