Petals flowing all around.
Soft music playing in the background.
Candlelight all around.
Each tiny touch sends shivers down my spin.
You make me feel so beautiful.
You make me want to love.
God, I love you so much.
I'm still not sure how I meet you.
I stopped caring the minute I looked into your glistening eyes.
Can you stay with me forever?
Author notes
Written February 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Sunday Night Love Stuff (contest) by BukGirl.
350 points, ended February 26, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow...it's a cheesier version of that one story.....i like it though....i always like reading what you write...it's one time i know you're speaking what you want to say instead of what you need to say
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oh yes, soft and romantic, how could one refuse? thank you for this very sweet entry into my contest.
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