And I'm still trying to write you the perfect love song
The right words that will make you stay with me
But I don't know where to start
And I can't find the perfect words
You were searching for
And still I am
Your fading memory
Another lovesick lullaby
Just another teardrop
in my eye
All the things that will never be
Author notes
I can't seem to make anything go together anymore.. soo.. here it is.. just another scrap in my collection...
Written February 26th, 2006
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wow just amazing!
i really wish i could write like you! <3
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i almost cried when i read this.... i'm still trying to hold the tears back.... but i really like this...
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Aww this is short but to the point and it made me want to cry but your not alone I can totally relate its so sad keep up the good work!
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Beautiful!
Aww. It starts off beautifully and it turns to saddness. In my experiance it's the imperfect words that mean the most. Good poem beautiful flow and lovly story! -
wow... what do you mean you can't make anything go together anymore?! i love this. i see the picture and the pain and everything in this. it's wonderful chibba. i love it!!
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wow this is sad
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I like it.. Short.. But sweet nonetheless, it shows a big picture with just a little picture frame, if you know what I mean, there's alot more going on here than meets the eye. And we all know love has no perfect words.. Good job!
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Very pretty, and sad. I like it!
~Amanda -
This is so beautiful, it almost made me cry. I love it.
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GREAT!
i like it. i've felt that way before...actually just about a month ago....anyways great poem!
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