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Night's Free Will

The aura of the night brings death
Haunting the hollow spirit's breath
The ghastly darkness decends from high
Leaving crypic marks on the sun's thigh
The mist it leaves creeps through the door
Unforeseen fortune for you is in store
The haze crawls into your mouth unoticed
Your heart beats once and then there's silence
The night has taken another victim though still
Another victim of the nights eternal free will

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Written February 26th, 2006

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  • thewriterwithin
    February 27, 2006
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    demoninfluenced ---

    Thank you so much for entering my contest. I loved it. I liked the rhyming scheme that you were able to use. I would have really been grateful if you were able to add the words I gave in the word bank, to your authors comment. It would have made my job easier. Anyway, I loved this poem none the less. Very well done.

    Thank you for entering.
    Good Luck in the contest,
    Take Care,
    x PatientGrace x
    Jasmine