I’m lost in the jungle of let downs
Feeling as if I’ve lost my army
I must fight this alone
With just my single sword
I’m afraid that I’m out numbered
I guess I just have far too many insecurities
My imperfections show my weaknesses
My wounds show my broken heart
I’m sorry that I’ll never be good enough
I’ll never be your princess locked away
You’ll never get the chance to save me
There won’t be a white horse in this story
I just wish that you’d open your eyes
And see that I can be your dark princess
That you’ll look past my mistakes and scars
Realizing you don’t need to sleep to dream
Author notes
Yet another assignment for my writing class 
I had to write about a picture of Three swords, and there's like a jungle like picture behind them... so yeah. This ofcourse has to do with some of my feelings and everything.
Written February 26th, 2006
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Excellent
fantastic write babe
So many people are scared to show their weaknesses when they are sometimes the most appealing part of someone's charachter. They are after all what makes you, well you
Well done babe 
& 
Your Hubby Steve
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Don't ya love it when a simple picture can bring so much to mind? I am glad to see you writing it all out,Lala,it will help you so much. things will work out...I just know it.
Love,
Deena
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I like how you managed to write this assignment out, involving your personal feelings within the lines
Very good done sweety pie and I agree with lostsouls12... I too love you for all your imperfections...
mammy -
lala this is so good. i love you for all your imperfections. you dont have to be prefect to be a friend of mine. keep up the awesome work and i am here for you. love ~me~
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this is very good indeed sweetheart, i like this poem a lot, i suppose i can relate....yet they never let us be their dark princess, or let us take away the pain.....stubborn fools....I love you dear.......
love always,
~Chris~
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wow....i like it. well written, good wording, but the flow was a bit off in some places...
"I’m lost in the jungle of let downs
Feeling as if I’ve lost my army
I must fight this alone
With just my single sword"
that is just brilliant....keep writing. --katie
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