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Book Love

I open my pretty little book
And to my surprise
Inside of a cave
Are some yellow, glowing eyes

Dancing with unicorns
Singing with dwarfs
All in my book
With a man that morphs

And all in my book
The adventures go on
Flying with dragons
That have brains and have brawn

Swim in a swamp
Soar with glee
Star-gaze with centaurs
Just you and me

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Written February 26th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Utok Bulinaw
    March 21, 2006
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    So wonderfully done. A very enchanting piece that takes me to a fantasy world. Thank you for entering and good luck! Eris


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    I wish I could morph...hmmmm now what would I become???

    This is a delightful fantasy, with a great metaphor of the book, being the mind and its wonderful imaginations, Great job!

    and blessings Sandi


  • R.R. Lim
    February 26, 2006
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    Splendid. You explain with great depth that ship which we call a book. Your words have taken me to paradises far beyond the scope of my greatest dream and fantasy. Dwarves, dragons, unicorns, such lovely creatures of the human dream.

    Very insightful poem, and you manage to feel in with the emotion of love blended within each verse.

    There is just one particular verse that I do not exactly comprehend. What does the line "with a man that morphs" mean?

    Nevertheless it is indeed a good poem. Good luck in the contest.

    Riche