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Shahrzad Maftooh ....(Acrostic)

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Shahrzad Maftooh ...An acrostic

Sometimes we're fortunate to
Have someone come into our lives
Along with many smiles and hugs
Happiness she shares with all
Rays of sunlight shine from her heart
Zestful in her love of life
Anticipating all that's good
Demanding nothing in return

Many people come and go
All for a reason true
For some it’s for a season, for some it’s forever
Today is brighter because of her
Our own dear Shahrzad
Once we know her we’re sure to feel
Her honest feelings through and through

....for one of the most loving and sincere poets among us.  
I'm happy that we found each other.  She always brings me smiles to start off my day

Dee Garner
© February 26, 2006

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Shahrzad is such a sweetheart.  Those of you who know her, know exactly what I mean.  those of you who don't...you're missing out on a wonderful person... go let her fill your life with some of those smiles

www.allpoetry.com/shahrzad%20maftooh
Written February 26th, 2006

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  • Vernal Bloom
    August 15, 2007
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    I came to this page from Shahrzad’s page. You know that she’s my AP sis and like you, I love her so much. She is indeed as sweet as sugar and her hugs are sent whenever they are needed.
    You wrote a beautiful acrostic for her, auntie and you’re also so nice to gift her this sweet poem *loves both of you*

    ~Vernal Bloom~


  • Abby100 Mann
    March 11, 2006
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    This is another loveable piece that gives the reader lots of ideas about the humaness in a fellow female poet who I personally respect.
    Thank you for sharing with me on this site.


  • J Rhys Davies
    March 6, 2006
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    Dee, isn’t it great to find people n this site that can just make our day brighter? I have found so many, and continue to find more as the days pass. I may just have to meander on over and check out to see if that is the case here. Excellent write my dear.

    ~ John

    whoosh crack!


  • catz Moderators member
    March 6, 2006
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    Yes, Ken, Shahrzad is a most sincere and delightful friend. She wrote a lovely poem to me today... if you want to check it out it's at www.allpoetry.com/poem/1859710 I love it

    And thank you so much for reading and commenting on some of my poetry. I'll be reading more of yours soon, too.....but now I gotta get to sleep.

    Dee

  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 6, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Hello Catz Such a beautiful Acrostic and a lovely tribute to a dear friend you have found. I'm sure she loves this and you as well. Excellent write, have a wonderful day, Ken IBT


  • Ellis gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    Oh YES !!!

    Sshahrzad is wonderful!
    She complimentss my writing,
    A positive, pleasant ear full,
    Something I just delight in!

    --Ellis


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    I am so thrilled to see this here.. she is indeed a special young lady..I adopted her as my niece a few weeks ago and absolutely adore her.. thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.. very nice to see.. keep penning as I see you have lovely poetic writes here.. again thank you..Linda

  • catz Moderators member
    March 1, 2006
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    Yes, Shahrzad is indeed a very exceptional lady You know her personally? How fortunate you are, Vic... I wish I could be so lucky.
    I look forward to her message each day, she's such a sweetheart.

    Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated


    Dee


  • eternalpoet
    March 1, 2006
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    4 Stars ****

    Hello Lady, ... I know Shahrzad Maftooh personally, its great to feel a presense of someone like her who is very caring and lovely.... and I love reading her poems, always full of hope.. and usually her poems have that cute effect and i like it too..

    Coming to your acrostic about her, its wonderful, i read it twice to enjoy it again.. and i am glad to have read this poem.. made by a nice person for another good person

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up.... your humble little friend.... .... .... ..... - vic ( who else? )


  • Wesley Storer
    March 1, 2006
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    Sounds good. I'll have to check out shahrzad! You must know a lot about mythology. I will give you 7 points, the number of peace! It's a number I like!


  • dreamer wind
    February 28, 2006
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    What a wonderful acrostic you have written for Shahrzad here. She most be some one very special in your life. I guess i have miss out a lots then. Sweet sweet poem.
    Wish you the best.
    dreamer


  • layla.
    February 28, 2006
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    hey dee congrats, you are a moderator now?! this is a very sweet poem tributing Shahrzad. i hope u are doing well,miss u!
    bye n tc.
    love
    ~~infinitus


  • hugh wyles silver member
    February 28, 2006
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    Dear Dee,
    I don't know the young lady who is the subject of your tender and caring poem but, thanks to the link you provided I have visited and read her Author's page and will certainly return to read some of her poetry.
    Allow me to take this opportunity to congratulate you on your metmorphosis from Greeter to Moderator. I am sure that in your new responsibility you will, in the decision of any trespass against our rules, judge with candour, admonish with friendship and reprehend with mercy for such is your nature.
    Applause for your acrostic tribute to Shahrzad and
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • Yemassee gold member
    February 27, 2006
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    Cool I need friends like that! It's wonderful when we meet nice people on AP. I seem to always mention links but you should add one to her author page. She said you spoiled her, does that mean if I now go visit she'll be a brat?


  • Bazza
    February 27, 2006
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    Cleverley written

    A very well crafted and presented acrostic that sings more praise to a wonderful person.


  • Starhiker
    February 27, 2006
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    What a wonderful acrostic you have written for Shahrzad here, Dee! A wonderful tribute to our persian princess. Your words are so true, she is a wonderful poet, that deserves all the kudos we can give her. You have my applause, Dee! Jim


  • Sonja
    February 27, 2006
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    Shahrzad is mz very pixcelious friend, always kind, merry and full of support for all. As you say: She always brings me smiles to start off my day... this is absoulutely true. She deserved to be a little spoiled from us with our verses. You have done your acrostic great.
    ~Sonja~


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    February 27, 2006
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    GREAT JOB!!!!! :F

    I must agree with you, she is a great poetess, and she does have a great heart. This is a lovely tribute to her, thanks for sharing, AngelicMistress


  • individuality gold member
    February 27, 2006
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    there is an inspiring acrostic poetry contest being held right now in the site, this would fit into it well i think it is wonderful

  • Ir.muse
    February 27, 2006
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    wow...my lovely mom,it seems that you're the next person who's spoiling me with a poem. However,you've already spoiled me enough.
    Thank you veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much for this lovely warm nice beautiful piece.It's really very appreciated.
    Love you,
    Shahrzad


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 26, 2006
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    excellent~

    This is a wonderful Acrostic sis
    I have just came to know her also...
    Love that pic and congrats on going from a Greeter to a Moderator....
    Love n hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

  • pozo
    February 26, 2006
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    Lovely poem This is such a caring tribute, I hope she likes it as much as I do Keep writing, this was a wonderful acrostic Good use of alliteration and imagery here
    Thanks for your comment/critique on my story, mom I looked it up in dictionary.com and I was correct the first time- although maybe the nervous stomach ache felt by those in love is personal to me If so, lol, let it slip on here
    All the best
    Pozo

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