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Subtle Whispers


Everything unraveled,
Like cheap ribbon from a dollar store
Screaming incandescent art
Mixed with mercury and oils

You don’t need to tell me
What you’re thinking

There are no subtle whispers

Nothing speaks louder than
S     I         l        e       n        c     e
Or like the tiles creaking on the floor
From unfaithful exits and extra unwelcomed
Company

And I layed there, alone
Like every night’s predecessor
Wondering, who’s next to grace me
With youthful presence, light fragrance
And scratch & sniff underwear.

Author notes

dont worry this isnt really based on anything. except inspired by creaking floors and odd clothing peices

Written February 26th, 2006

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  • WulfDiamondLou33
    May 23, 2006
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    amazing. this was one of the good ones have seen today. keep up the good work. love always diamond.


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    March 31, 2006
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    interesting write, thanks for the entry


  • Sandygram
    March 6, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    A wonderful poem you have penned here. The imagery was fantastic and the backgroud really compliment this poem. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the contest. Take care, Sandy

  • fangtacular
    March 2, 2006
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    you had me worried for a minute but luckily it was just a few lines inspiring a lonely write, good stuff