I can feel you, in the dark of night
Slithering quickly, moving out of sight
Always just beyond my knowing
As you get larger and keep on growing
I cannot see you, you are too far away
You always disappear in the light of day
I only ever feel you, as you come near
My breath come out sharply and crystallises to fear
I walk slowly to the edge to the wall
The thing is getting bigger - I feel so small
With another gasp I stumble at what I see
A mirror on the wall, showing .. me
Author notes
This is a really bad poem... i Know
Written February 26th, 2006
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That was pleasantly dramatic....
Brilliant!...
Nicely developed...
so fascinating...
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Nice...the whole twist was pretty great...
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oh wow Kim, this is so deep, but its incredibly true. I knew what was coming because of the title, but it did have a very twisted end! I love it! i do i do!
Great job here sweetheart, all my love
Stephani -
wow thanks a lot for your comment
Kimberley
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Deep
You speak the truth. What we run from is ourselves. -
I agree, love the twist at the end. Very interesting and unique write. Thanks for sharing!
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Awesome
Wonderful visions and imagery!. I see everthing you saw when you wqrote this, and that is rare. -
Thank you! it isn't my best tho ... hehe
Kimberley
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ggggrreeeeaaaaat!
This peice is very intriguing. I like it. keep it up.
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