Acrostic:
Sing sweet songs and live long life
Sometimes early
In the morning
Near the trees and flowers in the
Garden...
Sweet words of the chirping birds can be heard
With a melody of the universal magic
Everytime and
Everyday in its unknown language and unknown words like
Twin tit..twin tit....
Showing that some one is singing a song
Over the green trees
Not meaningful words yet but at the same time
Garden turns into the place of a divine joy
Searching for the true meaning of this life...
And this great meaning is a real truth of an immortality
Named as the beauty of the God with His
Divine blessings too...
Let everybody should know the secret of this magic
In which the meaning of life is stated
Vividly through the chirping of birds
Everyday you can listen the divine music of this great nature
Listen carefully these sweet words.. twin tit twin tit..
Over there in the green trees
Not understood?..if
Go and listen again and try to reveal its meaning
Listen with your soul then you will be able to know that
Its meaning is that 'sing sweet songs and live long life'
Forever as it is a way to understand the joy of life and
Eternity as well...
Author notes
4.Write about your journey to find the thing that gives you happiness...
A contest entry
- Invitation Contest 2 ( Kindly check your names please) by Manoj Sanyal.
300 points, ended March 2, 2006, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happiness...(Options Contest) by RunningWithScissors.
700 points, ended May 14, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Listen with your soul then you will be able to know that
Its meaning is that 'sing sweet songs and live long life'
Forever as it is a way to understand the joy of life and
Eternity as well...
this is written very well. i like the way you summed it all up in this last stanza. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna r langager -
aye the sweet songs of live, hear i often lie in bed in the early hours and just drift off to the sound of the birds singing
it is great, relaxing and dreamy.
Let everybody should know the secret of this magic
In which the meaning of life is stated
Vividly through a music of the chirping of birds
Everyday you can listen the divine music of this great nature
this could do with some work on the grammar, but the overall message of your poem is light and wonderful
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Beautifully Penned in a Kiss of Heaven!
My New Old Friend PrabhuDayal Khattar,
A beautifully penned song and lyrical lullaby
As you sing of the eternal beauty in all our eyes!
Your song sings of beauty
Your song sings of peace
Your song is divinity
You’re learned to fly skylark
And you only need the love in your heart
Strum your melodies so heavenly
You bring happiness and joy to all our beings
This is the beautiful you
“The joy of life”
Your magic is overflowing
In streams and dreams
Right here in the USA
For love can reach any shore
As we all rise up in the Lord
Sweet melodies soaring free
Unto the heartstrings of eternity
Best of luck in the contest, XXX, Hugs, and Love~
Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours, in sweet destiny~
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sweet song
How lovely! I love listening to the birds trying to figure out if they are happy or sad or looking for their mmate. You always bring a fresh perspective! 2nd stanza 3rd line, was that supposed to be "Everytime"? Loved the message. long life and sweet songs -
that is brilliant, so inspiring
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wow, really good.. I like nature and I like how you involved the it here... keep it up
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Thanks for your participation.
It is a beautiful acrostic.
Best wishes and good luck,
manoj -
Lovely acrostic you have penned here - flowes so nicely and is easy to read and understand. Filled with many lovely images too.
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This was very beautiful. So lovely to hear the birds singing their sweet song and to let that inspire that song of thankfulness within our own hearts. This beautiful creation was made like a garden for us to dwell in and we were given the gift to see and hear and appreciate.
Thank you for your joyous poem.
Peace to you Tara
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I like to listen to the spring song of the chaffinch here in Scotland, or if I visit the USA I like to hear mourning doves. Some acrostics can be laboured, but this one flows nicely.
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Beautiful
First things first in the first word first line you only need one "S". Other wise very beautiful and melodic. I've always liked listening to the Whipper-will myself or the Cardinal,however I supose even a crows caw appeals to someone. Good luck in the contest. -
great job
this is so greatly written.. you have done a uper job with this poem.. thanks for sharing with us.. been a pleasure to have read for you... keep up the great writting you are doing i look forward toreading more of your work.. thanks Hydrine -
A lovely poem to read first thing on a Sunday Morning.This was indeed clever.Well done and a beautiful piece to be proud of.Helen
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you are very clever. this is a great poem, so often when ppoetry is written in this stile it becomes forced, but this flowed beautifully . well done
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