How can I give myself to you
When my heart belongs to him
I really hoped the best for us
But the future might be grim
I don't know why I like him
Or why I don't love you
There are too many conflicting emotions
Someone please tell me what to do
You're all I ever wanted
But somehow I want more
This horrible side of me
Is something I've never shown before
So maybe I told you a lie
But the truth is I'm scared to love you
There. I said it.
If only I could say it to you...
Author notes
yes, i know. i havent written anything in like...a year. and im sorry about that. well, please tell me ur honest opinion.
OK, my feelings have changed since i wrote this poem but hey, i can still put it up right?
Written February 26th, 2006
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freakin a...i know that feeling...its agh...i hate that feeling...so hard to describe...but you did a beautiful job of it...
i'm totally jealous of your skills okay...there i said it...you heard me...gosh!
but by the way i'm back...i havent been on this thing...and hopefully i will keep writing...i've already added two...but hey...anywho..you're amazing ...theres nothing else to say! -
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE OFTEN!! I MISS YOU LIKE A RETARD MISSES THE POINT!!! WRITE MORE!! Anyways, I love this. My feeling for your poetry has not changed a bit. You are an excellent writer capturing the emotions of your readers and making them feel the confusion and torment of your own heart. This is awesome. I love you, I miss you. And I have to go. Keep writing, please???
XoX
Allie -
omg thats fucking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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