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Thoughts of the Obsessed

I'm obsessing
Can't get him off my mind
Something tells me
There's something special about him

Writing his name everywhere
Wishing he were here with me
Picturing him sleeping
Dreaming of us together

He is so sweet
Sweetest guy I've ever known
Do I like the idealness of him
Or do I like him for who he really is?

I wish he were here
I want to tell him how I feel
I want him to feel the same
What I want and what I get are always different

I can hope
I can wish
I can pray
But I can't promise myself anything

Still obsessing over him
Remembering the look of him sleeping
Wishing we were together
With each other today

Author notes

This is about a guy named Lucas. He truely is the sweetest guy I have ever met. He came into my life while I'm in a rough time, and he's helping me so much (not that he knows it or anything LOL), and I just can't come to tell him how I feel, as usual.
Written February 25th, 2006

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  • Foxydaze14
    June 22, 2007

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    I really like this poem, it is very beautiful. I was in a relationship like this one. Thanks for sharing

  • Walk th3 lin3 213
    February 25, 2006
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    Really good.

    I really like this poem because i can relate to it. It has alot of feeling in it.