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A Twin For YOU!

I don't know how to write this,
But I know exactly what I want to say.
We've known eachother for a while now,
And I know a lot of your ups, your downs, and your in betweens.
I know your weaknesses, I know your fears,
I know you like I would my own twin.
And you know me,
My ups, my downs, my in betweens.
Yes, you know my weaknesses, and, yes, you know my fears.
Now, this has no rhyme scheme,
But I'm hoping that it doesn't matter if you're looking at the meaning.
This is all meant to tell you,
I love you.
This is meant to tell you,
That it would be my greatest honor to be your official AP twin.
We'll help eachother write,
When we can't quite seem to find the words.
We will criticize eachother,
To help improve eachothers' writing.
We will encourage eachother,
When one needs encouraging.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEASE,
Keep me as your official AP twin?!






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I love you Shion! I miss talking to you lately! MAKE ME YOUR OFFICIAL AP TWIN! I don't care about the contest! Just YOU!
Love always,
~Sakura
Written February 25th, 2006

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  • Trenchmouth
    February 25, 2006
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    YAY! SAKURA I LOVE IT! hehe this is so sweet! thanks for entering!
    s and s
    ~Shion