Two meteorites collide
You are by my side
We lie on our backs
Listening to our favourite tracks
I cautiously touch your lips
You breath out
Silence. I can't even shout
My heart beats fast
Please, let it not be the last
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Written February 25th, 2006
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thought about it! ^^ gonna leave the kiss and replace it with ... !!
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i like how you put the word 'kiss' by itself as the last line. what would give it even more impact is if you ended the next to last line with '...'
very nicely done
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wow its rly sweet, short but sweet. very gd write. keep it up
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i like it
its very real.
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