Sweat drips down an aching back,
Tired arms continue stroking, as they had been for hours.
Shining brightly on exhausted boaters,
The sun starts to fall in the sky,
Turning a rich orange and
Bringing a new energy,
That comes with the knowledge that
The day is nearly done.
Author notes
part three of ???? of my canoeing thingy
Written February 25th, 2006
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yeah, haha my next two will complete the day cycle, and the rest will be isolated events, little anecdotes in poem form
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simple and beautiful,i've canoed some so that helps imagine it i think
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I am intrigued... Gonna have to read the previous ones now ;-P
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