A weightless earthworm
snatched from his home
predicted doom
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Written February 25th, 2006
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thx for telling me the typo ^^ its not that i dont know how to write that word...
well, sometimes my fingers are faster than my brain
Edited on Mar 28, 6:23 because ''. -
thanks. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by.
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Nice
"Predicted doom" is what touched me, because before the day even started you must have felt that way, and thats scary. -
you mean line 3? word one? its like prophesied .. like you already know whats gonna happen.. hes destiny is already foreseen
you know what I mean?
I hope I helped you.. dunno if i can use this word in this case but for me it was there first word which came to mind when i wrote that..
predicted doom = forseen fate .. -
issue, This is a good subject for a haiku but can you tell me what the first word in L3 means? It is either misspelled or a word I am unfamiliar with. Thanks
Dennis :^) -
lol ^^ i thought.. damn its too early, i have to work and i got a cold.. i should better stay in bed
muahhaha freaky xD stfu issue xD -
interesting write
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FREAKY
FAAAREEAKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYWHAT WERE YOU THINKING WHEN YOU GOT OUTTA BED THIS MORNING! JUST KIDDING! LOL LOL
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