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Feather

A pure white feather
It blows gently in the wind
Out of the cushion

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5/7/5 syllables dunno if it's right but I learned it in school that way
Written February 25th, 2006

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  • issue
    February 25, 2006
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    sry ^^ my english is not the best.. i changed it a lil bit.. hope the mistake is eliminated


  • sanmdr
    February 25, 2006
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    interesting write ... except for the spelling mistakes