You are my moon my star
Alone with you in the night
You have confused my mind
You are the light which takes me through the dark
You are my sunshine
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Written February 25th, 2006
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thx
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short and sweet
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thx for telling me the typo ^^ im also glad that you liked that one.. i would say that it is not one of my good ones but anyway.. thanks for telling me!
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nice job!
ooh, first comment! ahem, so... i really like this one because i'm basically in love with using sun, star and moon imagery in my writings and you do a great job of putting them all together here in a lovely picture, especially for such a short piece! it reminds me of a piece i wrote actually that i have yet to post up on here. anyway, this is a great piece, the only thing is i think you meant 'through' when it says "trough". so good job, and thanks for your comments on my writings! best wishes
~love-music-darkness
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