You are the star above the horizon
You are so far away from me
I can nearly touch you but you are still too far away
Desperate. Why? Why can't I be with you?
Just the thought of you and me drives me crazy and I cry
All tears are gathering together in a long river
The river of yearning
The infinite river
I'm trying to stop the river in the foreseeable future
With your power?
You've left me long time ago
I need you but you don't need me
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Written February 25th, 2006
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thanks, I'm really glad that you liked it. It is a very old poem but we know that poems last for ages and they are still up to date...
Hopefully my life will get better too!
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I can really relate to this poem. I have spent a good part of my life in love with women that didn't love me. I even married a couple of them. Thankfully my life and love got better. This poem has a strong message and is elloquently written.
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Of course will you move on but until that it's a long and hard way. It's hard to forget someone you really love. It's like when someone cuts into your flesh and takes it away. Something is missing physical and mental. Thanks for you comment too.. I'll maybe work on that... thanks for your point of view.
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This does happen somtimes to people, and it is sad, but eventually they will move on to love again. thou they dont think they will....they will, i used to be one of those people, and well u move on, or at least try to forget. i think u could make it a lil longer, and explain y she left, why u want her back, and how strong ur love was when u were together...just all around u should add more to it. And thanxs for ur comments.
Autumn
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beautiful and strong
So sad and touching,it's absolutely beautiful,the words and emotion,every line,every heart,it's like a beautiful song again
Keep it up,You great
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