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Heart

Cried every night,
Eyes are wet in the light,
Moments shared washed in the tears,
No more feelings and happiness to wear,
Closest was he,
And came closer each day,
Away was i,
And farther i go they say,
Love was he, love story was mine,
Heart was his,
But pain is mine,
No!!! pain is not just into my destiny,
My place in your life is very tiny,
Sadness is now very pally,
God tries to bring some shine to my family,
Unsuccessful and unapproachable,
Oh! still my love and your heart is so lovable!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

Just a thought when somebody is in deep love with someone but ends up as a onesided lovestory.
Written February 24th, 2006

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  • Arsenic-
    July 18, 2006
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    The pain is evident, and the longing for belonging also...wow. Thanks for sharing. Michael.

  • AnoushkaRustagi
    April 22, 2006
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    Thanks friend for reading and commenting.


  • leo2
    April 21, 2006
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    Unrequited love is the pits isn't it? Love is best when it is freely given and returned. I hope you do find it soon.

    Regards,
    Leo Long

  • AnoushkaRustagi
    February 27, 2006
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    Thanksalot Shaitus

  • shaitus
    February 27, 2006
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    Nicely written.
    Beautifully selected words.
    ~shaitus.

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