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Next Month

We been apart for two month now
Two month, I been trying to forget about  you
But still can't keep my mind of you
I hear they say you had a new girlfriend now
I'm happy for you
But at the same time I angry at you
Angry why you had girlfriend so soon
But I know I have no right to do so

One day I saw you and her in the grocery store
You come up to me
All smiling and said I'm getting marry next moth
Then you go back and introduce her to me
She look at me saying how much you talks about me
Then she smile and said we getting marry next month and I hope you be there
With that you and her holding each others hand and walk off
My mind keep replaying what you and her said
We going to marry next month.....................

Author notes

People change so soon. One minute you fall in love next minute you fall apart.
This poem is for my ex that are so special. I want to stab him.
Written February 24th, 2006

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  • prettyktm
    May 19, 2006
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    Dear Snow, you know maybe your ex-guy didn't deserve you and there is someone better waiting for you. But I know how it feels
    take care.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 4, 2006
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    This poem is for my ex that are so special. I want to stab him
    i love the poem and that author comment just cracked me up. you are so honest and i love it. i know this feeling all too well though i would never dream of it. viyanna r langager


  • Ellis gold member
    February 28, 2006
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    Excellent Writing

    You write truth. You do it well. Your writing is beautiful.

  • Eusebius
    February 27, 2006
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    Bravo!

    A sad poem, but very nicely done! Bravo!


  • February 27, 2006
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    I know some one like that. They can say 'oh, i love you so much' next minutes they are with someone


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    February 25, 2006
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    Yes dreamer....guys sometimes suck!!! They seem so unaware of a womans feelings. Although he and her were friendly, he failed to realize what a smack in the face that was for you! Love stinks sometimes. Theres a special someone out there just for you....great job.


  • MorningWinds
    February 25, 2006
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    Awww, dreamer *hugs* That's just wrong, it must have hurt so bad. But you did a wonderful job with this poem. GOod job


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 25, 2006
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    This was very sad poem.I'm really sorry!Very well done!
    Keep writing
    Best Wishes
    ~LostMermaid~


  • February 25, 2006
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    Very sad but true also. Love it

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