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Concern

I was reading newspaper other day
Read about a girl who died of starvation in New York

She was seven years old
Too young to die
She comes to school with new bruises everyday
Her skin look dead
When I look at the pictures they post in the newspaper
All I see is skin and bone
Skeleton is the word, to describe her

Teacher assumes she has problems at home
Teacher has concern for her
But every time they ask 'what wrong'
All they get for replied is 'nothing'
They try to help, but they can't do anything
Because she never complaint

Every day in school was that little girl's heaven
Because she got food
Food from cafeteria
Some time teachers in class will give her cracker or two
But she never ate it
Because that is supper for her

Then one day out of no where
She didn't come to school
Teachers tried to call her home
To ask why she didn't come to school
But no one answered

Next day and the next day
All the same
Finally one teacher called the police
But all they found was the little girl's body in her room
Beaten to death because she got a yogurt from the refrigerator
Beaten to death by her mother's boyfriend

Author notes

Things like that happen everyday.  It's sad but a very true story.
Written February 24th, 2006

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  • prettyktm
    March 18, 2006
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    This is so painful and I agreed with your author's comment.
    Thanks so much for your comment on my work.Take care.


  • Ellis gold member
    February 28, 2006
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    Good Writing

    Your poetry keeps me in reality. --Ellis


  • honey bear
    February 27, 2006
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    very good but very sad

    oh my what a sad sad story,it happens all too often in this world, that a child should suffer such is beyond belief. this is a good write though filled with emotion ,sadness and anger as i am sure anyone thatreads it will have ,


  • dreamer wind
    February 26, 2006
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    Thank you. Change it right away Thank you


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    February 25, 2006
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    Sad

    So sad...I think you meant supper...and got yogurt.


  • February 25, 2006
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    but so true


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    February 24, 2006
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    This is so sad......Heartwrenching. What a horrible life that child lived. Know shes in heaven with wings...

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