Starring threw the darkness
my eyes are glowing...RED!
I can see into your...FUTURE!
I can glance into your...PAST!
LOOK AT MY EYES and tell me what YOU SEE
look into my eyes straight into my...
MISANTHROPY
THESE PEOPLE and their WORTHLESS LIVES
oblivious as the immortal coil UNWINDS
i am watching them glaring at their inevitable FATE
waiting for my chance to rise...AGAIN
i carry around this feeling this...
hatred for man kind
i am waiting for it to doom itself
as i have seen done in the past
i have seen the rise and fall of kings and gods alike
watching from afar staring threw these EYES!
there is no SOUL
there is no PURPOSE
there is only SELF INDULGENCE
every thing you do
is but i minor preamble
to my coming
and my destroying
all of mankind
so live your life to its fullest
for soon it shall be gone
for a shadow will fall upon you
and all you'll see......
ARE TWO GLOWING RED EYES AS YOUR EXISTENCE FADS AWAY!!!!
Author notes
Written February 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- What do you have for me to read? by imprisioned soul.
300 points, ended March 9, 2006, 38 entries
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This is only slightly hateful, huh? I enjoyed this mad rant, but you really need to use the spellcheck. There are way too many typos. They hurt the piece and make you look bad - and that's unfortunate because this is one of the more coherant rants I've ever read. Good! - oce
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"i have seen the rise and fall of kings and gods alike
watching from afar staring threw thes EYES!"
I loved that line! don't know why, I just did! The whole poem is very intense! Its great! Keep it up! -
Kick Butt
hey dude, this is really awesome, i like how you base it on the two glowing red eyes. pretty kick butt if you ask me. keep up the good writings, and see ya tonight.
-Kelsey -
Hey this is really good too....I love it...
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i kinda wrote it on the fly so you know...spelling errors will be made...if you notice the poem keeps consistant with talk about eyes so really it should be implied that what i ment is stare but thanx for the correction ill try and do a better job of spelling next time
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WHOA!!! this is pretty intense for me to read. my only suggestion is that you have stairing--that would be as in climbing stairs. stares is as looking at something. which did you mean? you wrote this full of emotion and it is a bit chilling. thank you for sharing your writing with me tonight. viyanna r langager
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