Im laying in a casket
My eyes are transparent
MY skin is torn My. flesh is not all there
Somewhere inside a constant beat comes to be
suddenly the world turns from black to color
six feet of dirt has never moved so easily
i crawl from a whole i find a strange craving
a craving for flesh for blood of the human kind
i find a girl but she doesnt notice me
until my teeth sink into her tasting her warm meat
she emurgas with a shreak and a cry
i am consuming every inch of her
COUNTING VICTOMS ONE BY ONE
FILLING MY BOWELS WITH THE FLESH OF EACH
COUNTING VICTOMS ONE BY ONE
SOON A DEAD TIME GOAL WILL BE ACHIEVED
i see corpses lying motionless at my feet
blood runs from my mouth
it seems i cannot fill this craving
a craving for flesh that has me tourchered
i grab another one it seems to come so easily
they seem to be trapped in the bowels of my eyes
they just stare at me as if it must be
now suddenly there is no around
did i do away with them all?
COUNTING VICTOMS ONE BY ONE
FILLING MY UNDEAD STOMACH WITH FLESH
COUNTING VICTOMS ONE BY ONE
I HAVE ARISED AND BETRAYED GODS LAW
i find the craving has passed
everyone is dead
so dead must return to there cripts
i crawl back down
six feet into the ground
and close my casket for an eternal sleep
the flame dies out
climax has been achieved
there is no god ive proven him false
human life is so easily taken
i counted my victoms to a grave for each one
DEAD!
Author notes
really its a song....but you know whatever
Written February 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- raindrops keep fallin on my head... by .
450 points, ended March 18, 2006, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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hey, yah i dont i already commented o this im im not sure but yah i really like this if i havent ... its really good. you get really detailed and its really easy to like picture everything that is going on its just really kool ....
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ok so i was going through the poems in my contest and i know i read this one but i didn't comment on it? hmm that's weird. but anyways i really like this poem! it's creepy and gross and i liked it. ya i cannot think i'm really tired but you did a really good job on this! yay! thanks for entering it in my contest!
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Bronze winner here - copngratulations for this win in this contest.
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good stuff
Oh wow, this is freakin creepy. I like it, though, because I'm just sick and twisted like that. Suddenly I'm craving human flesh... LOL
Definitely a good write, sent chills down my spine.
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sounds like a good heavy metal song. id say death metal, but the lyrics in most death metal songs have no poetic value whatsoever, and they generally suck. this, however, was written well, with poetic beauty.
id like to hear it. *thumbs up* keep it up. -
Well, I was hunger, but think I lost my appetite, lol. This was certainly an interesting piece about life on the darker side~also, looks like you are new to the site~welcome!Nice to have you on board
vj
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hey this is really good
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hey this is pretty kick butt, but yeah, i read this before, i like it alot, post more dude, peace and see ya later.
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This is really cool...It mezmorizes (sp) you...great job!!!
Love
Girl
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