Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

How can she be so cruel

Who is she?
How can she be so cruel to her kids?
Beating is what she does the best.
But she never left any bruises
Needles and nails are her weapons of choice

Every day she beats her kids up
For her, they are a mistake

They scream but no one can hear them
They cry but no one gives them comfort and says everything is okay now
No one loves them is what they think

Sadness and betrayal is what they feel
Sad that no one cares for them
Betrayal because they wish every night before sleep
Hoping it is just a bad dream

Stop hurting them
Is a voice you can hear miles away
But only if the kids can hear it
For them, they live in isolation from the world

She always told her kids
No one cares for them
If they did care for them
They would have been save already

Day after day, month after month, year after year
Kids lost hope
They isolate themselves to their mother
For them, bruises and pains they feel are nothing now
It like the food they eat, no taste

Then one day like usual day
Their mother comes home screaming and yelling
She picks an old use needle from the table near by
Grab one of the kids and start to poke the kid as hard as she can
Ask the kid why can't you cry?
Why can't you scream, like you use to?
Why?

Then she walks into her room
Next thing the kids know
Polices and helicopters are seen everywhere
"We have found the missing kids" that what they say
Peoples start to treat their wounds
Give them food and blanket

Then the police went into their mother's room
Arrest her, but all she said is ¡°I didn't do anything¡±
¡°Why are you arresting me? You are hurting me your son of ----¡±
That the last word the kids every heard from their mother

Author notes


Written February 24th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Ellis gold member
    February 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Good Writing

    I don't think people are basically good,
    Which is the idea today.
    People just don't seem to do what they should.
    They most often are living the wrong way.

    --Ellis


  • February 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Picture of a woman bloody hand. It match with the poems you write. You did a FINE job


  • February 25, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Love the picture and i agree with everyone. But it's not sad it's depressing

  • disparate
    February 25, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I agree, when reading this through it made me really sad. The ending was a bit of a twist, I certainly didn't expect it to end that way.


  • Melissa Powell
    February 24, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    So sad...Love the picture!


  • honey bear
    February 24, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    very sad.

    this made me want to cry, how sad, how very sad.

1 - 6 of 6