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 What's That, Daddy?

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What’s that, Daddy?

 

Noncoplanar points of arithmetic-sequenced concyclic loci
of accelerated velocity variations...

 

but it looks too pretty to be math!

 

It is a massive star on the brink of destruction, my dear...

 

but...

 

On the brink of destruction it lies, my dear!
It’s explosions drawing ever so near
to the nests we nestle in on Earth right here...

 

4 million times brighter than our sun
(and 150 times as massive, too!)
They say such large objects are highly unstable
and are prone to a violent outburst or two...

 

like Uncle Bobby, Daddy?

 

Yes... err... Hush! (Daddy's on a roll!)

It will probably end its life real soon
as a supernova in 10,000 years
following the Ball-of-Light Particle Model-
with two lobes expanding in spherical-harmonics
destroying itself and its tiny companion

completely...

 

Tiny companion? Like meeeeeeeee, Daddy?

 

hmm... yes... my dear,
a tiny companion that orbits around
and around and around it ever 5.5 years,
and the tiny companion even has its very own name...

 

'Thumbelina'?

 

Merrrrrrrwww... no, not ‘Thumbelina...’, my dear,

but 'Eta Car B'-
it is a Wolf-Rayet star, with the mass of 30 Sol’s,
give or take a Sol or two,
just a baby, compared to it’s mother...


Does the mother have a name, Daddy?

 

Yes, the name of this most rare and luminous,
massive and bright blue variable star, (or LBV),
is Eta Carinae A, mostly after the nebule it is in-

which is found in the Southern Hemisphere near the Southern Cross
in the constellation Carina and in the nebula of Eta Carina...

 

Daddy?

 

...Yes, dear?

Is 'nebeuooola' a house, Daddy? Is it? Is it like a house, Daddy?
Huh, is it, Daddy? Like our house, Daddy?

 

Mmmmm... house, yes, my dear...
a very large house, for Eta here
is one of the most massive stars in the galaxy...

 

As big as Aunt Millie, Daddy?

 

What?!!!

 

Does the house have a garage, Daddy?

 

Drrrrrrrmmmmm, it doesn’t need a garage, my dear...
as it is constantly exploding ejecta blobs,
so no garage could hold it for long, my dear... 
 
I saw "The Blob"!

 

Yes, but he didn’t have dusty debris
in a large, thin equatorial disk
around a giant homunculus...

 

Sounds big, Daddy! If you were a star,
would you be this one, Daddy?

 

How can I be a massive star and the Sea of Tranquility, too, my dear?

 

Ohhhhhh...


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The star survived this explosion... it is 8000 lightyears away... the dad and daughter went to the planetarium... she had a hotdog... that is all she remembers... (but Daddy understands...)

Top photo a composite made from a photo taken by the Hubble telescope;
bottom photo- the Eta Carina Nebula, location of the star Eta Carinae.

Sudden, Profound Original Thought- now if the Big Bang followed this explosion model, there would be TWO diverging material universes with an equatorial ejecta center... not to mention ejecta blobs out there somewhere...

Written February 24th, 2006

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  • Random Goldfish gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    Haha...I love this...and no...I still didn't learn anything new about stars from reading it...I loved the nebeuooola thing.


  • ToltecWarrior
    February 28, 2006
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    I really enjoyed this piece. I like the way the you described things to your daughter, and the responses from her. I like the enthusiasm of the Dad. Great unique format.
    Thanks for entering this. Itis delightful to my mind.

    TW


  • B Chandler
    February 27, 2006
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    lol wayne...
    im both stunned and speechless too
    im totally lost at and for words here that shows you how impressed i got reading this

    Rae


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 27, 2006
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    Hi, I remember reading the quotes you used it will come to mind in a bit if I can find it in my notes,lol. nice poem can imagine the scene with the little one, all the best in the comp, very amusing write, hugs Di


  • Unspeakable Tears
    February 27, 2006
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    i did not like this poem. it did not appeal to me at all.


  • wbiro gold member
    February 25, 2006
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    thanks greatly, Myrddin, and greeting to NY!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 25, 2006
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    may I add it also shows the extraordinary patience the daughter had with her enthusiastic dad! lol thanks for the comment, Dragon Tamer


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    February 25, 2006
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    "With the eyes of a child, you must come out and see...." A very well written play, spoken tongue in cheek. Great job.

    Peace and blessings, Myrddin


  • Dragon Tamer
    February 25, 2006
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    This was very funny and educational to boot.You have done a fine job of showing just how patient one must be when explaining things to a child that has neverending curiosity
    Great job my friend and I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Don

  • wbiro gold member
    February 25, 2006
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    well, suseann, thanks, but even though the piece did start out being about the really cool exploding star, I think the dad/kid relationship stole the show!


  • suseann
    February 24, 2006
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    See the trick is with little ones.You only give short simple answers to questions asked.Or you will only create more questions. Same applies to me I guess!Ha! These astute explainations left my pea brain asking uh? But gave me lots to think about.OK,now I'll admit you know far more about the universe in general than me.Some big surprize although not to you,you'd say.You get my gold award for knowledge acquired all the way to the heavens nefew.lol~~Auntie Suseann

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    well, Viyanna, this piece was about a couple of things, the dad proudly spouting out technical details of a star he really likes, the star itself, and the father/daughter relationship, where they are both showing each other a LOT of patience! lol

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks, sigrun... glad you enjoyed my little romp through a father/daughter relationship... even though the contest is on 'space'!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks, kim, you got the important part- the relationship! The technical? Some was just plain gobbldigook! lol so you couldn't have understood it! So don't be too hard on yourself!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks, butterfly, for the encouragement... to be fair, not all the technical jargon made sense, so don't be too hard on yourself! The main thing was the relationship, I think...

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks bluebethy for the applause... I hope it was for the father/daughter relationship and not so much the technical presentation on stars!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks for the comment, Angel, no need to be down on yourself for not understanding it all, you got the important part- the father/daughter relationship!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks, gets, glad you enjoyed this one... it was more like the daughter really getting her father going...! lol so the daughter showed just as much patience... carry on! (but no need to rush things...!)

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    Thanks, Chii, but no need to understand the technical details, for that was a backdrop to the father/daughter relationship! take care...
    ~Your Poetry Dad!

  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    thanks for the great comment, Amy, yes, the relationship was just as important an aspect to this piece as the subject of the star was... (and really cool star!) and you know I like your spirit, whether it's up front or not at any one time... (and life has a lot to do with that...)


  • Porcelain Doll
    February 24, 2006
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    This is adorable! *laughs* I love it.... *smiles and hugs tightly* Good to be back to reading your writing! I'm back up in good spirits again Sorry for being gone so long This is just adorable!! What a wonderful patient dad... I could see this kind of conversation happening between a father and daughter
    ~Amy


  • getsbetter
    February 24, 2006
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    WOW! That was very, very good Wbiro. I loved the anxious questions that tied into the narration, Almost seemed like a very subtile father answering a hyper daughter. Great job. I enjoyed reading this. Few words that ran over my head, but got the jest. You have my applaud my friend. And BTW, thank you for your kind words you put into my poems. I know some are alittle repititious. But, in time my heart will adjust enough to carry on. Thank you again my friend, GETS

  • No1s-Angel
    February 24, 2006
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    lol, this was adorable... and um, some of it went way over my head . It was still a very creative, and cute write. Good job!


  • bluebethy
    February 24, 2006
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    this was a very cute right
    i liked it it a lot it showed the pure innocent child trying to relate to the complex words and explaination the father was trying to give.
    excellent job im awarding it an applause
    byes for now
    ~*~ Beth ~*~


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    February 24, 2006
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    I don't know if its just me.. But I find this kind of confusing.. SORRY!!!.. I kind of got some of it, but it confused my stupid head.. I am really sorry!!!!!!!!!.. Its probably just me.. Anyway, it was good (the bits I understood).. I've read other poems from you and you are very talented.. Keep up the great work.. Good luck in the contest!!


  • Mylovemyhurt
    February 24, 2006
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    i don't know if i got this at first but i think This is adorable,shows you have a big heart---kim

  • sigrun odinsdottir
    February 24, 2006
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    awesomeness

    This is adorable, intelligent, and sweet. I absolutely love it. Brought a smile to my face and laughter to my heart Blessings, Sigrun


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 24, 2006
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    ok? i don't know if i got this. other than my initials are all a part of the write, i do not think i understood any of it. guess i really am an airhead. viyanna r langager (former last name with B initial)


  • pulsating
    February 24, 2006
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    Nice,shows you have a big heart.

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