Tears running down my cheeks
The blood still running trough my veins
I'm getting tired of my shackles
I want to be free like air
I'm exposed to my despair
I'm veiled in my unique skin
I feel the world underneath my wings
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Written February 24th, 2006
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ya, you are right. such is life.. thanks for your post.
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freedom has been on my mind a lot lately and this poem sums up that feeling quite well. there is a restlessness to longing for freedom. you've captured that feeling with your words too. nicely done
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No matter where you are, no matter what you're doing, it'll never be what you want it to. You'll feel smothered when you get to that "freedom" sad, but true. Nice write, though!
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Powerful and creative
This is so powerful,moving and very true,happens all the time to everyone,Very creative and deep,It's beautiful and amazing
Keep on writing,your great!Something special will happen to you
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i liek the way that this poem flows. it works quite nicely. good work
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