I'd soar the sky with two broken wings
At the ballroom of heaven I'd dance with Cinderella
And for once I'd forget about all my scars and pains
Author notes
Written February 24th, 2006
Option 3- Anything fairy tale related, it can be an fairy tale (happy or sad ending). It can be about someone who doesn't believe in fairy tales anymore. It can be about someone who wants their own fairy tale come true. It can be happy, sad, funny, or any other feeling you can think of. ANYTHING FAIRY TALE RELATED.
A contest entry
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575 points, ended June 17, 2007, 124 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fairy tales and Fantasies! by Doll Faise.
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What did you think
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This is a great fantasy. I like the two broken wings and dancing with Cinderella at the ballroom of heaven.
Very original and you've put a lot of imagery into three lines.
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Short and sweet. It is a very short but it sends a message. It's great, keep up the good work. Good luck.
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Your best poem
Short, But to the point. Clear as a poem should be.
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How beautifully written
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aaaaaaaaaaah, It is a fantasy to be whisked away from a place where theres pain. Terrific write with just a few lines! Good luck in the contest
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fantasy what i lovely title and a lovely write to match it thank ytou for submitting this into my contest and i wish you the best of luck in it to
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well, for such a short poem, you did an excellent job, and sorry about my spelling and stuff, it is three am in the morning right now.
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On earth, I need my pain. Don't know what I'll need in heaven. I know things of this world gave me wings to fly...then they took away the sky. Therefore, I breathe light and love in a darkness that comprehends no light. Windows open in the spiritual mnind that the earthy mind has witnessed about in few humans. Deepest lonliness breaks only the outer sheel of a soul...the human part. The rest of the story is love.
Peace Through Love,
Timothy
(I served most of my life in a prison constructed by myself...and 13 & 1/2 years in prisons constructed by human hands. The former prison had invisible walls...the ones most difficult to surmount). -
lovely! "At the ballroom of heaven I'd dance with Cinderella" i love this one! great write!
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This is very touching - so profound statements said in such simple ways - lovevd the image - where did you find this marvellous graphic? Lovely poem.
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whoa! wat a fantasy?
?...swirling with cindrella?? ..and whos the cindrella here 
you havent mentioned that yet 
Ankita -
this is truly a pretty piece of poetry.. love the humming birds used as the particular charaters in form..keep penning..good luck in the contest..
Linda -
If love didn't do that to you you'd certainly want your money back. So simple yet so powerful an emotion love is.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it. -
I really love this, particularly the first line; there's an intensity in this. A brilliant poem. Hope you do well in this contest.
Kiran -
Very nice.
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WOW!!! this is amazing that you could say so much in so few lines. this is not a talent i posess and i admire you for such a gift. you always make me smile. viyanna r langager (this is my real name and i have gone back to it)
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This is a very intense and powerful write in so few words. Thank your for your entry into this contest!
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