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Save Me, Save Me

Staring at the white walls
They surround me in this room
Tied down with restraints
Trying to escape this hell
Held together with black strips
They wont take this jacket off me
Twisting and turning every which way
Let me out before I suffocate

Save me, save me
Take me away from here
Save me, save me
Don’t make me lie
Don’t make me hide with my fears.

Leave me alone
I’ve done nothing wrong
Don’t drip that venom into my veins
Take the needle from my arm
Catch me before I fall
I’m tumbling down
No one hears my silent screams
They echo in this room alone.

Save me, save me
Take me away from here
Save me, save me
Don’t make me lie
Don’t make me hide with my fears.

Darkness surrounds me now
They let me out too soon
Too many pills taken
Last thing I seen was crimson blood
They left me to wither
They put me in my own Oak box
No one came to my funeral
My secrets were left up, locked.

Save me, save me
Take me away from here
Save me, save me
Don’t make me lie
Don’t make me hide with my fears.

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Something I just wrote.
Written February 24th, 2006

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  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    October 21, 2006
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    seems like lyrics to me, a good written lyrics, yeah this is fiery hot, it's a bazooka write! well done, the words are brilliant..

    Leave me alone
    I’ve done nothing wrong
    Don’t drip that venom into my veins
    Take the needle from my arm
    Catch me before I fall
    I’m tumbling down
    No one hears my silent screams
    They echo in this room alone.

    these words are dripping with intensity and anger! beautiful.


  • Niki1227
    March 4, 2006
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    this was a great write i could feel the pain in it and the words captivated me Nik


  • smileywiley22
    February 24, 2006
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    excellent

    i like it.
    good job