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Life

Life is a stage that we should charish and love
Because we never know when we can be called by the man from above

Getting our life and selves together is what we should do
because we never know when we are finally through

Death doesn't have a color, height or age
So do you think your ready for that stage

Life can be a challenge and hard to maintain
but try to make the best of it before it flows down the drain

So take my advice on what I just said
Because you never know when you may end up dead

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    very well written

    Wow. You sure have written the truth in this poem. I like the message of this poem. We never do know when our time will be up. You did a great job on this one.

    etherealforu

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    February 27, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment. LOL! Sorry about the color.


  • Frankenchrist
    February 24, 2006
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    True that! Make sure you treat every day like its your last is what I always say!


    great work but the color combo is hard on the eyes.. GW!

    Frank.


  • DarkFire-J
    February 23, 2006
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    This is true baby thats why every day i'm with you.
    love you sweat pea