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No, no, no.

You created these rules                              
Followed by a breed of fools
Those mindless wonders                                                                
They never stop to ponder

Telling me to do this
Draining away my bliss
Make me feel like I’m not enough
That life is hard and jus a little tough.

Taking away my spirit.
The will to balance it.
Pushing me under.
Deafening  as thunder.

Telling me I have think like them.
Saying I need to act like them.
Screaming I need look like them.
But wont ever be quite as good as them.



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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    February 24, 2006
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    Very good. I'll use this as the basis for your acrostic.