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Have You Ever Seen An Angel?

Have you ever seen an Angel?

I have.

I have one.

She doesn’t have a halo, Or a pretty dress with wings

She doesn’t have a harp That she plays when she sings.

But she’s there for me, Day in and day out

There through my good days

And even more through my bad

 I wouldn’t trade her For anything in the world

 She’s the reason for this song

 I have an angel, do you?

 My angel is my mom!

 She stands behind me,

 In everything I do,

 Pushing me, and supporting me,

 Telling me I can.

 She’s my best friend When the day is through.

 Our mother-daughter talks, Theres nothing better

 And I love curling up with her During crummy weather

My best friend.

My angel.

My confidant.

My mother.

Author notes

Option 6, I admire my mother
Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    Great poem that I really enjoyed. Especially since I lost my mom in Jan. But unfortunately I have to remove it since it has won a trophy already. So sorry.


  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 9, 2007
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    hi i thought this was good and i enjoyed reading it alot your flow was great well done thanks you for entering and good luck


  • AmazinJason
    February 16, 2007

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    see this is beautiful and it shows such strong love for your mom, and then right after that (your next post) it's like you're hiding a horrible secret, and i'm so confused.


  • a means to an end
    February 14, 2007

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    ....

    this is an excellent poem... u have me in tears. i can totally relate to u with this. my mother has been through so much stuff with me because we can relate so much to each other we have managed to get thru this. this is beautifully written! GREAT WRITE


  • kim5519
    February 3, 2007

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    I like it it's really sweet. I don't really relate to it though because I'm in a sort of stage where me and my mom don't get along too well. It's great you have such a strong relationship with your mother, I just can't image any one could. Well any way good write.


  • Amera gold member
    February 3, 2007

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    I came her because of your contest rules but I’m so glad I did. This is a lovely piece and well worth my time to read it. Thank you. The flow is simple and well thought out, it falls off the readers lips. You gave the reader insight to yourself; a big plus. The imagery is beautiful; I have an angel too. Blessings, Amera


  • Dragon Tamer
    February 3, 2007
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    very heart warming

    This is a very warm and heartfelt poem.I'm sure your mother is very proud and flattered that you feel this way.Maybe if enough people read this, they too will realise that they've seen an angel or two in their lifetime Thank you for sharing such a moving poem with us.
    DT


  • El Pescador
    February 3, 2007
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    There is much more than beauty in this poem - a warmth that is only ever found in such a relationship. This is a unity that is sadly lacking in so many other homes. I really like this one, you must have a really great mother.


  • bugga-boo-bunny
    April 27, 2006
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    good write...i wish me and my mother had a mother daughter relationship like that...my mother used to beat me...


  • irene plunkett
    April 25, 2006
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    this is an amazing write. it shows a great interest to me and it gives me hope that mayb i have an angel. great write from irenexxxxx

  • OutsideTheCircle
    March 3, 2006
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    Very touching. Isn't this how everyone should feel about their moms!! Just kidding. Your contests are great and so are your poems, Keep on writing!!


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    March 1, 2006
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    heart felt

    every daughter should love their mother as much as the daughter can , and i feel that this was so incredibly beauiful that i am left speechless.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    February 25, 2006
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    I really liked this. I was kind of wondering why your pic wasn't in the middle. But I don't even know how to place a picture. I would appreciate it if someone would show me how...but anyway, good write! I know your mom would love to read this.


  • xSallyxDollx
    February 25, 2006
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    This actually in a way reminds me of a country song I heard a little while ago. You described the job and role of a mother in a persons life perfectly; you did an awesome job keep it up!!

    ~Lonely~


  • Tear-Stained-Heart
    February 24, 2006
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    Awsome work. i fall out alot with my mum even to the point where she physically and emotionally hated me but this describes how i feel about her even if she does hate me. great work.
    XX tear XX


  • PassionOfAnAngel
    February 24, 2006
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work girl!!


  • Tenshi Asakura
    February 24, 2006
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    That is a very sweet poem. a lot of people don't really take time to aprreciate their mothers. but your poem really does portray the love a mother has. it was a nice break from all of the dark poetry. this is amazing.


  • Shannon62875
    February 24, 2006
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    WOW!! this is very good you did a very great job..and thats also the way i feel about my mother... its excellent and you did a great job expressing how you feel about your mother...thats very good!!!! im glad to hear you and your mother is still close especially while you was in your teens.. it was great!! keep up the great work!!

    Shannon*Lrah


  • mushroom king
    February 24, 2006
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    Ms Amber Eyes very nice, you painted a picture which I wish I could sincerely express as my own reality oh well life sucks then you die tehehehehe but ah good job Yea!

  • Raynn
    February 24, 2006
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    AWESOME!!

    I really and truly envy people that have the kind of relationship that you have penned about. Show your mom what other mom's are like by letting her view this contest. Then show her exactly how you feel, by showing her your write.

    Good luck to you in the contest.


  • myselfinthemaking
    February 23, 2006
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    This is good. I'm sure your mother would love it. It's good that you feel this way about your mom, many people don't. It seems like you tow have a good relationship, and that is awesome, hang on to that for as long as possible, it's a special thing that not everyone has. Keep writing.


  • MorningWinds
    February 23, 2006
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    Very well done. Beautifully written, very touching. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Shantalina
    February 23, 2006
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    The picture was being stupid and it wouldnt center. It would have looked better had it centered but it didnt.

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