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Believe that I'm okay.....

I'll be alright
Cuz I can fake it
Just one more slice
I think I'll make it
I just don't see
What's wrong with hurting
If it makes sense
Don't bother skirting
So grab my blade
And weild it lightly
I'll hide them well
Cuz friends will fight me
I'll be alright
Cuz I can fake it
Just one more slice
I think I'll make it

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I'm okay.
Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • GhostOfARose-
    March 7, 2006
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    This is so beautiful. It's short and to the point, and what an impact that point makes!
    I don't know what else to say other than wow.. Un-cliche..
    Keep Penning.
    Moon Bless.
    Kenaz.

  • shivher
    February 28, 2006
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    Yeah. It's hard to really understand why people do it. I haven't cut in awhile. It's hard not to do it, but writing about wanting to seems to make it a little easier. *shrugs* I'm glad that you liked my poem.


  • theAniMaL
    February 28, 2006
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    thank you for this. my best friend in the world is a cutter and she can't explain WHY she does it. this really turns on the light for me.

  • shivher
    February 24, 2006
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    Glad to know I'm not the only one. I'll make it... just one step at a time, right. Thanks for the comment, and for reading this.

  • shivher
    February 24, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, and for reading this

  • A Little Cliche
    February 23, 2006
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    touching

    I just want to let you know that I know what faking is like. Hope you make it through.

  • The Innocent Tears
    February 23, 2006
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    wow..i really like it..it's really good

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