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Praise Be To God (Acrostic)

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Praise the Mightiest of Kings
Refuge from all evil things  
Apostles followed everywhere
In God they trust so we can bear
Salvation brings peace and love
Eternity with our Savior above
 
Blessing bestowed as a reward
Embraced in love with our Lord
 
Tribulation undone by sweet accord
Obtain the true word of Christ

God took your sin was sacrificed
Only He can make a blind man see
Delivers all who believe to eternity


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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • Mistifear
    September 7, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Wow. That was amazing. It's amazing how God compells us to write the most wonderful poems and such to glorify him.
    Edited on Sep 07, 8:33 p.m. because ''.

  • Ellis gold member
    February 26, 2006
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    Excellent Writing

    Interesting rhyme scheme.
    What it says matters more.
    It is the poem's theme
    that is supreme at its core.

    --Ellis

  • Sandygram silver member
    February 24, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you my sweet AP son. I always love your comments. I am so thankful for all you have done for my faith. You have helped me through so much to keep me on the path to our Glorious Father. Thanks and big hugs for you. (((hugs)))) MOM

  • Sandygram silver member
    February 24, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the nice comment. It was just somnething I wrote in a hurry. I always appreciate hearing from you. Hope you have a wonderful day. take care, Sandy
    Edited on Feb 24, 7:30 because ''.
  • thunderingpanther
    February 23, 2006
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    a very nice write, much better then i could of written on this topic. I do how ever feel unfulfilled by it for some reason -Probably the mood i'm in--it just doesn't seem to have your added little touch that makes me feel like im living in that piece like so many of yours do for me...

  • josh-13
    February 23, 2006
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    Amen this is an awesome poem sandy I loved it, Glory be to God, amen, you seriously did an amazing job on this piece.

  • u took my user name
    February 23, 2006
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    well written, but i think you should add some imagery, show the power and love that god holds for everyone, and the sins that we were saved from.
    A pleasure to read, but i strongly believe that you need to SHOW this sacrifice and love, not just tell us. use vivid adjective, and certain lines that will depict such thing. That's just my opinion.
    Be well

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    February 23, 2006
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    WOW!!!

    i really needed to read that today. thank you sandy fo always having the perfect thing for me. viyanna r langager
  • Murasaki
    February 23, 2006
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    I like it. It's a very simple poem, but it says alot about God's love. As for improvement, I would strive for more imagery to represent what you are saying, this will make the poem unique. Keep it up!
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