The One

Hear me, as I whisper in
your ear
trust me, as you hide
that lonely tear
tell me, of your fears
and disturbed dreams
nothing is as dark
as it may seem
shelter in my warm
inviting arms
Soothing words I'll
speak to you as
you know
we love you too.........

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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A contest entry

Contest: Make Me Feel Your Words by Night Hope. 300 points, ended March 4, 2006, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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cutiepie
March 6, 2006
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thank you my friend Delighted that you enjoyed it
Sai Babas Lotus
March 4, 2006
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WOW! This is so warm and full of love, thought and care. Short but speaks volumes in a few lines. I like it a lot.

All the best,
Charisma
cutiepie
February 24, 2006
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Glad you liked it Hope you have loads of entries
cutiepie
February 24, 2006
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Not to worry sweetie...lovers come cheap hehe...Thank you for your lovely comments
cutiepie
February 24, 2006
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Thank you It is always a pleasure to write for such a magnificent swan
Ir.muse
February 24, 2006
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wow..this is amazing dear friend.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
Darknessbabe
February 24, 2006
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beautiful
This is beautiful...something i would dedicate to my lover...but as usally i dont have one...but whos one to complain....keep it up!!~Darknessbabe
Night Hope
February 23, 2006
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Dammmnnn, Lynne...whatcha doin' to me, my Friend??? This is succinct, powerful, intuitive & loving, Lady... How'd ya know??? Thanks for entering & good luck...Walks off mutterin' 'bout your psychic abilities Swanee