When you leaned against my bedroom doors
and your beautiful eyes were filled with sympathy
and your dazzling white teeth were not showing
I knew something was wrong
but I did not yet know
That my world would soon come crashing down
that my life would soon seem like it is at end
that tears would soon make my eyes red
When you dragged your finger against my wall
and you seemed unsure
that you would soon reply
with the news that would devastate my life
That my world would soon come crashing down
that my life would soon seem like it is at end
that tears would soon make my eyes red
You were in love were her
that you couldn't help the temptation
that you did not consider
what I meant to you
that when you said you loved me
that was just a lie
When you told me your true feelngs for her
I couldn't deny
that I tried to hide
tears swelling up in my eyes
You said you were not aware
that you had me to lost
but guess what
this will be the last time that tears will swell up in my eyes because of you.
Author notes
Written February 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- emotionals the way i flow by Sunkissed.
300 points, ended February 24, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I might change the title to "Tears swelling up in my eyes" or "Made my eyes red", but that is your own choice! I really think your best poetry is when you have an emotional connection to it! Great Job!
