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Zoo Called Life

A man walked
B riskly along the shores of the
C aribbean
D aring the
E arth to hear his plea.  He
F ell to his knees and took a
G asp of air
H oping someone would hear his prayer.
I love my God and
J esus his son.  I'm aware that he is the
K ing of Kings and the
L ord of lords.
M ask my pain from the
N uances of daily life,
O bliterate the cancer that
P ierces my flesh.
Q uietly
R escue me from the
S trains and
T ragedy this world has brought
U pon me.
V ictory, someone once told me that there
W as victory through you, but I can't see it, and the
X rays can't either.
Y es I need you, are you happy now, I need you. Save me from this
Z oo called life that I live in.

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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • sylverfrost13
    April 16, 2008
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    yea this is mad cool


  • Nature Song silver member
    December 14, 2006

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    Unique

    This is awesome in ints own right. Using the alapbet to write this poem. Great imagery using Jesus the King of kings in this poem. Far to often one forgets that we are not alone, even as we dewll in our flesly states here on earth to await the end when we will become a part of his greater kingdom in heaven. Masterfully done. ~Sie

  • Kenshins wife
    March 1, 2006
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    nice work I think the alpebet worked in this write very apelling
    I like it.