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A Wolf's Prey





Splashing toward the ocean,
He eyes the almost ice-cold food
Flipping furiously to get away.






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Written February 23rd, 2006

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  • midnight eyes
    July 12, 2007
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    Wonderful poem.


    Amber


  • sunny day
    February 8, 2007

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    Hungry Like the Wolf!!!!!!!!

    Deb, All I could think of here was Duran Duran, Hungry Like the Wolf. Sounds like that one was going after a salmon there. This was short and very concise. Nature's food chain in action. You produced some wonderful imagery with a few words and I could feel that ice cold water chilling me to the bone. Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen with us. You are so attuned to nature, I believe you are one with it. Keep it flowing. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Red Shoes
    February 24, 2006
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    this made me think of ocean turtles which I adore. When I see those little baby turtles rushing towards the waves! Thank you for your entry!