I hear the blood pumping
and feel it moving thru my body
I can smell the flech
The blood and the life
Running thru her body
The hunger is growing
and veins are throbbing
Body is getting weaker
I need to taste her
I see her now, weak and helpless
Her body getting cold and limp
As her blood runs through my veins
The blood tastes so good
She is still breathing
I must feed her
So she can be Blood thirsty
Just like me
Author notes
This is just something I wrote for the hell of it! I got really bored! hahaha.
Written February 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Spooky by krymsin kyss.
600 points, ended October 30, 2007, 16 entries
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Wicked!
An awesome write, excellent imagery! Good luck in this contest! -
Very nice write...very nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck :]
Avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~* -
Vampirey!!!!!!!!!
ooh, I really like this one! it's very good! I like it a lot... I love how you let it flow... tho it's not really flowing... you just had a way with words in this peice! good job!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!
Crimson -
I do too!
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great vampiric piece..i have a fetish for vamps and blood
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thanks! Kewl... I got bored and wrote this.. It's kind oflike a little bit of a sex thing...
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Cool vampire poem. I have a cool pic that would go good with this piece!
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